Tuesday, December 21, 2010

Poem #95

What if I expressed
my love for you mathematically?
One plus one is greater than
infinity, emphatically.
4/20/02010

I also made a six-word variant, inspired by the Six-Word Memoirs project at SMITH Magazine:

Me plus you, mathematically: infinity, emphatically.

I happen to like the six-word version much more than the original.

2 comments:

  1. I love the six word variant!!!!!

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  2. Me too. Plus it's one of the very few of these that I can recite from memory. I have a funny feeling I should turn it into a greeting card, though.

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